I believe your feedback was what prompted me to move this flashback up a little. 😀 It is now interspersed a bit through Chapter 3 and I think will keep the pacing more interesting as we go along!
No, I’m with Hornet; her present haircut is awful, and even the circular hairdo she ends up with looks better (or it would if she stopped scowling).
You can also see the kind of curls she’s picturing here; she wants her sister’s curls, the kind that flow down and fall perfectly, not the kind of curls that stand out from your head. She has a vision for her hair! Just not a very accurate one 😛
Aha! This answers my question about how did her sister let her do that to her hair.
I believe your feedback was what prompted me to move this flashback up a little. 😀 It is now interspersed a bit through Chapter 3 and I think will keep the pacing more interesting as we go along!
Uh, oh… 😮
bad choice… 😕
the tiny curls would have been better… 😉
I dunno, I think the end result looks good–even if it takes some getting used to! (Mind you, if it were my hair, I might disagree.)
It would take a special effort to be worse than what she’s got on this page.
*yells at the screen*
DON’T DO IT!!!
No, I’m with Hornet; her present haircut is awful, and even the circular hairdo she ends up with looks better (or it would if she stopped scowling).
You can also see the kind of curls she’s picturing here; she wants her sister’s curls, the kind that flow down and fall perfectly, not the kind of curls that stand out from your head. She has a vision for her hair! Just not a very accurate one 😛